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Oh, Let Down Your Hair Just Once, My Love

Prose Poetry

Jillian Spiridon
2 min readMay 28, 2022

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Photo by Andrey Zvyagintsev on Unsplash

You are not the princess locked up in the tower whose spire pierces the blue sky above.

No, you are the tower that I must scale — if you’ll let me, if you’ll even give me the time of day.

I have watched you for so many suns and moons that I grow dizzy at the thought of actually knowing you. Will you charm me? Or will I be disarmed by your prickly personality?

I can count the number of times I’ve seen you look to the stars and sigh, as if the very nature of the world disappoints you.

Can I be a world to you? A world to traverse and explore at will?

Or will I just be another wall to you, a boundary you must avoid to find another way out of your personal maze?

You keep everyone out, as simple as if you are just blinking or staring, but I wonder: will that always be enough for you to be on your own?

I’ve watched love stories drown before they have a chance to prosper.

I won’t say we could be a love story — but I almost wish I could call you “my love” in the way of centuries-past romantics.

We could be a storybook ending with epilogues filled to the brim with adventures.

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Jillian Spiridon
Jillian Spiridon

Written by Jillian Spiridon

just another writer with too many cats

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